Oh, and if you forgot,
you left your soul on the table
not that it's your hand to turn
but maybe it's mine to burn
because your deceit and hatred
have long gone untolerated
not only by I
but the ones that surround, confound you
I didn't realize
through your passionize
that I was once
just
like
you
but there is a soul in me
that strips in console of free
that doesn't stop to your grave or death
but instead it's in your head
were your eyes lie naked in the room of the dead
eating away the shady places that you keep most locked through multitudes of doors and that is where I am in the easy chair and my finger hovering over the last push to send you over the shallow end
because you will not find
in your palace of unkind
no soul, body, or mind,
of someone who was, is, and will forever be,
so blind.














Comments
This is amazing.
Period.
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What if all the world's inside of your head? What if everything you think you know is an elaborate dream? What if everything around you isn't quite as it seems? What if you could look through the cracks? Would you find yourself afraid to see?
Do you think its my best yet or no?
I don't really know, so, I'll wait for your opinion.
Actually, I am going to write an analysis for this poem, so that people can understand all the figurative language in it.
Check back within an hour or so to see it!
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We do not live in Hell, so therefore Murphy does not have a law.
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I'd say, yeah, definitely the best. One-upped my entire gallery, not to mention.
I got it, so I don't think I'll be needing the analysis, but thoughtful nonetheless.
It's pretty cool, I will.
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At least I have the ablility to write poetry on command, then.
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"We live in a world with no bounds, besides your own.
We do not live in Hell, so therefore Murphy does not have a law.
Every end always fails to stop a new beginning." -Doc R.
"Imagination is more important than Intelligence." -A. Einstein
Yeah, you're pretty good at this.
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it ends where it starts because i have nothing. i knew it all along, in my heart. i dont want what im becoming. my life came and went. it flashed before my eyes. ill never know what i meant, and it came to me as no surprise,
So far you're top ^^
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